just a poem i wrote today!!!!!!!! :)

[clarissa heath]

the way u make me feel is sometimes undescribeable;
but what youve done to me is also undeniable.

with u i laugh when i wanna cry;
for u i feel like i can try.

life has been hard for me;
because of u, with new eyes i can see.

i used to think that drugs were the ONLY way;
but isnt that what they all say.

i trust u which shocks me more than anything;
which is taking every part of me.

u tell me that u love me because im real;
but really its just because i tell u how i feel.

i cant stop the way i feel about u;
u make me feel like can actually be true.

i hope to god this will last;
because with u ive had a blast.

u made me fall soooo fast;
i just wish i can heal from the past.

slowly i know i will;
u just have to give me time;
but thats not gunna change the way i love how u make me feel :)

[khaling benjii]

awesome!! :-)

[lit candle]

this is great,i'm glad that i gave up drugs too.

[Beyonder]

It's clear to me that you are well schooled in the highest traditions of modernism...this is a masterwork of Joycean form with evidence of some existentialist influence by Kafka and Plath. In particular, the line:

i used to think that drugs were the ONLY way;
but isnt that what they all say.

belongs in the pantheon of some of the most devastating couplets ever conceived. I, too, once thought drugs were the only way, but, now, thanks to you, I know that's what "they" all say.

Bravo