New Thought Order

[Danksmoke]

This is a little rap I wrote, I'm not sure how well it plays out in writing, but it works in my head.....................................................

A new way of thinking is in order, to calm the mayhem and disorder
Eliminate propagandist authority, become the seeker and destroyer
Driven by insane rationale, a fine line with brilliance on its border
For the courage to think for yourself is a point of veiw in shortage

So fuck the government, the politicians, and fuck their fucked up ways of thinking
Fuck the puppets on their strings and fuck their corrupt administrations
Fuck the Republican party, and fuck their corporate fornication
And fuck the Democrats as well, "two-party" rule is destroying this nation

It's a complicated situation, met with aggravation and frustration
On the end of a short fuse, psychotic agitation
Murderous hostility delivered with such violent motivation
Schizophrenic personalities furthering mental degradation

Day by day, slipping away, expanding a hopeless situation
Walking insanities' line, teetering on the brink of self-destruction
In this world that's gone completely fucking mad, society fails to function
In a logical manner, the end is near, apocalypse is coming

[2XChromos]

This poem actually is exciting, so refreshing because you describe everything that is going on accurately and you don't miss a beat. I have to tell you it's brilliant.

"Driven by insane rationale, a fine line with brilliance on its border." Very eloquent and your poem describes exactly what is going on - every line is in perfect sync - it flows, it would be even better if you put it to music and recorded it.